Wild

Number One Katie,

I’ll be critiquing this book as the paranormal/thriller I thought it’d be, not the romance/erotica that maybe it’s supposed to be. This might be unfair to the book, but Wild provides some excellent examples of weak writing that I and every other aspiring writer can learn from, so why not talk about them? … More Wild

Tantalize

Hey Ashers,

This is not the book for you.

Books have a goal in life, and it’s to mercilessly manipulate a reader’s emotions. The number of emotions I felt while reading Tantalize: zero.

However, it does offer some fine examples of How Not To Write, as well as Things That Will Frustrate Your Readers, so let me spend a bit of time covering those. … More Tantalize